Should I stay or should I go?
To leave would be to lose the love but to stay would be to allow the pain to stay.
I wish this would all just go away, I wish that this topic never left his lips, I wish that some how this would all just magically fix itself without hurting me.
To fall asleep forever right now would be encouraging, to leave things the way they are right this instint would be the most amazing act in the world.
To fall asleep and never wake, so that I could feel as happy as this near future makes me feel.
To fall asleep and never wake, to keep that not-so-near future far from my mind, my soul, my heart.
I just wish it would all just float away, no more pain, no more suffering, letting the world leave me with this feeling of bliss, untouched for all time.
damn girl you are out there, i like how you put your thoughts into words, i cant do that like you do, and whats going down in the near future? what is this you are looking foward to? and whats with this no more pain or suffering? and i like before when you said you like to chill back and think of nuthin, i get stone sometikmes and do the same. You said in your post you went on a hike, i am always looking for new chill spots up in some hills, if its a sick spot you should through me a post on where its at so i can check it out one of these weekens =) keep up the good work, late
Michael
what can i say you got good words for a true poet unbelievable i do poetry myself and thats absouletely amazing keep up the good work
This is a good poem. I like how you translate the pain and happiness through your verses, for your readers to relate to, it really shows emotion in your writing.
It’s a good poem breken . Well thought. You created so much imagination and I felt it.
sorry you’re hurting…hope it’s all worked out! getting out in nature always makes me feel better. writing and getting it out can help too.
I feel like that sometimes or shall I say all the time yet we still smile…… Just know it all get’s better some how. Just think there are people out in a deeper whole than we are…..and they survive their trial so we can survice ours… Hang in there girl!!!!!